Thanks all, really appreciate the feedback
Well the mic definately gets a thumbs up which is good! I'm going to get a pop filter amak1 that should hopefully remove some of the pops / s's, will look into a de-esser to.
I'm getting a mixed response on the colour correction, i wish i could make the rest of the map more normal and just bring out more colour, will look into it more.
I agree 17mins is a bit long, if you did watch it to the end thank you!
I don't plan on commenting on a vid that long for a while lol